needs a bit of work
a) set audio to stream instead of event so it doesnt go out of time with the music, by the time he was singing it was already about 4 seconds out.
b) some bits seemed very repetetive, and there was quite a lot of looped animation which isnt too fun to watch.
Keep at it though you have a lot of potential.
Oh ok, i see what you mean by stream, i didnt know what that meant so thats why, i did notice it was out of time on NG but not on my Test Play, thanks for the 5
Living up to the reputation
As usual your artwork is superb, the fbf is flawless, and yet it retains that great hand-drawn look of the another day series.
I like how the dream was actually like a real dream (random, but makes sense), I hate when people try to show a dream like real life cos they never are!
Keep up the good work.
Nice work
Even though the game isn't really it looks v kool. Actually it has kinda inspired me to make a similar game.. but i dno if i will.
Nice drawing
Great drawing, but since it came from a comic thats probably not news to you. Some frames skipped by way too fast to see what they said, and sometimes the text seemed to be squished and unreadable. I kinda got the jist of it though and it was pretty funny. Sound, colour and some neatening and it would be brilliant.
Genius
Yeah.. the graphics are pretty simple, but they look nice. When the guy is singing on his own, and going down on his knees etc it looks really funny with his little pointy arms. Liked the humour, the lipsync style had me in stitches for some reason. Really nice piece of work, though it could have been shorter since by the end it seemed there wasnt much humour left and the scenes were similar.
Hit and miss
Some parts of it looked really nice, the us army guy, the helicopters, they looked pretty sweet. The city seemed very lazy, since when is a city a line of towers. You could have spent more time working on that, since you have showed how good some stuff can look when you do try.
Also think the animation of the guy when you press play needs a bit of work, but the rest seemed fine.
Nice stuff
When I was first going through it I had no idea what the hell it was going to turn out like, however the end product is really nice. You work towards a great bg in steps that seem very simple. How a tutorial should be.
Aaaargh
The graphics were pretty good, as you said the sound quality isnt great, and for some reason george has an extremely quiet scream.
Also the preloader seems to be bugged, you mite want to fix that.
Better..
It's certainly an improvement, don't give up.
Though I would recommend more practise and less submission for a bit.
Haha
Brilliantly funny! The atmosphere was great. When he was knocking all the stuff off the shelves the music fit perfectly. Love it!
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