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Great drawing, but since it came from a comic thats probably not news to you. Some frames skipped by way too fast to see what they said, and sometimes the text seemed to be squished and unreadable. I kinda got the jist of it though and it was pretty funny. Sound, colour and some neatening and it would be brilliant.
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Yeah.. the graphics are pretty simple, but they look nice. When the guy is singing on his own, and going down on his knees etc it looks really funny with his little pointy arms. Liked the humour, the lipsync style had me in stitches for some reason. Really nice piece of work, though it could have been shorter since by the end it seemed there wasnt much humour left and the scenes were similar.
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Some parts of it looked really nice, the us army guy, the helicopters, they looked pretty sweet. The city seemed very lazy, since when is a city a line of towers. You could have spent more time working on that, since you have showed how good some stuff can look when you do try.
Also think the animation of the guy when you press play needs a bit of work, but the rest seemed fine.
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When I was first going through it I had no idea what the hell it was going to turn out like, however the end product is really nice. You work towards a great bg in steps that seem very simple. How a tutorial should be.
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The graphics were pretty good, as you said the sound quality isnt great, and for some reason george has an extremely quiet scream.
Also the preloader seems to be bugged, you mite want to fix that.
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It's certainly an improvement, don't give up.
Though I would recommend more practise and less submission for a bit.
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I like the style of art, though some parts seemed a bit untidy. One thing that stuck out was no matter which way you walk, when you stop you face right. Idea is nice, don't see much like this very often. Way too short though!
(In response to the previous review: what is the point putting a guide to the game instead of a review... it seems silly to me)
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Brilliantly funny! The atmosphere was great. When he was knocking all the stuff off the shelves the music fit perfectly. Love it!
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I really hate when people post "first animation" crap, it gets blammed in an instant. BUT this is an exception! You are really talented at this and I look forward to seeing some more fbf work from you. =)
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I do remember seeing that nike commercial and I have to say this seems very similar. If this is an exact replica of what the people in that commercial did (i can't really tell from memory) then shame on you! However if you made it up then hats off it looks really nice.
Either way the stlye (hand-drawn white on black) looks very cool, nice piece of work.
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thnx
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